I currently have three amazing gentlemen from the gamebook fanbase, helping play-test and proof read my second Literally Immersive Gamebook. One thing I have learnt is ‘proofers and players’ are not the same thing unless you find the right ones. Many will do just one or the other, and even though the second draft is being done, inconsistencies are still being found.
Once this superb team has finished, I’ll give it another browse myself. The final edit be on my head lol. Hopefully wrinkle free. Unlike my head. It should appear on Amazon by next week.